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Would You Be My Life?

by Kshitij Mall
(In My Angel's Heart)


You are my love
You are my life
I love you more
Than I can ever say
Wherever you are
There I will be-
For ever and ever!
I may not often tell you
Of the love within my heart-
Of all the dreams, hopes
and plans of which you are a part-
But still I'm sure you know
How much I love to be with you,
How much you mean to me.

Here goes my real life proposal to my Angel...

Sweet as Saccharin, cute like a doll,
A mermaid as pristine, as a dust free rainfall.
The only girl whom I loved from them all.
It’s you my Angel, in whose love did I fall.

It’s ironic that we met so late,
But you are my destiny, you are my fate.
I knew on day one that you are unique,
But never thought you were the one whom I seek.

When you bid me adieu and said ‘See You’
My lonely heart said ‘I will miss you’
Next few days, awake or asleep, I saw you, just you.
I decided to blurt out my feelings that I love you.

I am a different guy from many conventional.
My love for you is not ephemeral but eternal.
I won’t marry anyone else save you,
It’s obvious because I love you, just you.

I don’t know whether you would like this;
But life without you is listless, without bliss.
It’s stupid to ask-
‘Would you be my wife?’
I now put the question of my life-
‘Would you be my life?’
-6th August, 2009




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Would You Be My Life?

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Another milestone!
by: Himanshu Mishra

It's great, simply fabulous.
Your angel is very lucky to get you. :)

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POEM
by: Anonymous

rocking....

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awesun
by: neelu

very sweet & romantic.u r great my brother

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beautiful poem
by: Anonymous

rele very nice,....a girl wud be very happy if sum1 said her d way it is done in d poem..

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lyrics
by: brijesh

awesum lyrics sir....

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Awesome Kshitij
by: Anonymous

Gr8 bro. Happy for you. U became a poet too. One more feather to your Cap. ;)

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PIYU N SAP
by: Anonymous

grt...

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Awesome
by: Prakhar

U already make a fan of your poems buddy....say whatever, this poem in particular is really showing ur innermost feelings... :)

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beautiful expression
by: Vikas

damn gud yaar... feeling of luv has been expressed beautifully... showing completely ur passion towards it

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MIND BLOWING
by: Anonymous

wat a poem....
my heart has changed.......
oh.........

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good poem
by: Anonymous

it took her to long to accept ur proposal after such a poem

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very sweet!!
by: Anonymous

nice work...very sweet and romantic ..no wonder she cried...u r very lucky kshitij s ANGEL!!!!:)

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Decent poem
by: Paige

I like this one.

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Sweet
by: Davo

I liked your poem.

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Changes in my earlier comment!
by: Kshitij (author)

When I said she cried I meant tears fell from her eyes! Senti ho gyi bandi! It doesn't mean she cried like a baby!

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Gud 1
by: Anonymous

sahi hai beedu....u rocking...aap to ji kavi ho gye...:P

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Fabulous poem...
by: Anonymous

wonderful combination of feelings and words...perfectly serving its purpose...


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5 stars for Angel!
by: Kshitij (author)

After she read this poem she began to cry! She said you never expressed your love and this poem reminds me of each and every moment that we shared!

Love her a lot!
:)

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great great great!!!
by: Nitish

I see a lot of emotions here......Great....:)

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Proposal accepted!
by: Kshitij (author)

I proposed her on 6th August. She accepted it on 3rd October! :)

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Pretty Good
by: Josh

Pretty good poem.

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Love It!
by: Katie

I loved your poem. Don't usually hear such honest emotion from a guy. Good Job! What did she say?

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