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So How Can She Hear ?

by Nitish
(Kanpur, Uttar Pradesh, INDIA)


Can you cut me?
Cut me open
all my nerves and
all my veins
open them
and unplug my heart.
I wanna show you
show you some beats of mine.

Now first slice
slice my heart
such that
my heartbeat fades
Does that sound fades?
NO!
Cut it into halves then.
Now?
No sound, Okay?
What! Still it's there!
and both of them beats?
No, No
it can't happen,
But if it is,
butchered them into thousand pieces
and crush them well.
It must have gone by now.
Lend your ear
and tell me the truth
what do you hear?
They are not beating.
Confirmed like a day.
Right! Oh thanks God.
But wait a second
did you say?
Did you say that they are still making some noise
which you can't recognize at all.

Oh now let me hear it
let me hear it now.
Cause it's my heart
and it will be there when I die.

But it is-
It's your name!
It's your name, Angel.
It's your name!
They all are enchanting your name.
Can't you recognize it?
Are you distant?
Come closer to me and now you hear
still you can't make anything out of it.
More closer then,
still???
Oh my Gosh,
say me it's a nightmare
not something real.

But I knew God
deep inside my heart
I knew it well.
She is not mine.
She is someone's else.
So how can she hear?



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So How Can She Hear ?

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starstar 		Don't Care For This One
by: Katie

I am sorry....I don't care for this one. There are a few good lines, but as a whole...just not to my taste at all.
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starstarstarstar 		Another IITian stuff
by: Anonymous

:)... no error this tym! Nice poem!
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star 		Thank You Guys
by: Nitish

I am happy that I am receiving honest comments that would certainly help me improve....:) Thank you guys.....:)
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starstar 		Huh?
by: Davo

Have no idea what this is suppose to be.
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starstar 		You're Losing Me
by: Allie

This one was borderline gruesome in my opinion. Seems you could have found a better metaphor or been a little less graphic.

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