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She is An Angel

by Nitish
(Kanpur, Uttar Pradesh, INDIA)


Should I say her
Flowers!
or should I say her
just my angel!
Whatever she is
I know this well.
With all her smiles
some flower blooms.
And with the shyness
of her eyes
some flower smells.

Yesterday night I saw two stars
thought I would have that for her
but when it came close by
I saw her eyes
like twinkling twinkling
little stars.

Yesterday night
I saw some lightnings
like thundering loud
but it didn't rain
till her shiny hair fall
and made some clouds.

Two earrings that she did wear
playing and wrestling
and catching tunes
to make her calm
and make her divine.
Voice oh so sweet
as if bees come
for all the honey
that often flows.

Should I say more
or would you believe now.
With whom my heart lies
in short she is an angel.

Kept enough of her in my eyes,
With all compassion here she lies.
Always caressing my dreams and life
here she lives, on my smile.

But this is not all
what I have to say.
For the soul
she has!
I love her,
really love her deep.
O' God tell her now,
No mater what happens,
I would always love her
and my love shall be true
as shall my death.



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She is An Angel

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by: Katie

I disagree. This is not a bad poem. It perhaps is not as good as some of your other work, but sometimes you have to see beyond just the written word. There is a language difference that causes some problems, but still not a bad poem. Lovely sentiment.

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Thank You
by: Nitish

I love your honest comment..:)
thank you very much..:)

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by: Anonymous

Wasn't impressed by this one.

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