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She Is An Angel, My Life

by Kshitij Mall
(In Hearts of My Readers, INDIA)

Angel of My Life

Angel of My Life


A girl fraught with tensions said me bye,
Inadvertently made my fettered heart cry,
I loved her, still I was probed don't know why,
To spend just one life with her, I was ready 1000 times to die.

You know I can't lie to you, however hard I try.
You are the one for whom I contend, I vie.
It is proud to be with you, my head held high.
Still you don't understand, that's why I sigh.

You are not special to me, you are even more.
My poems have a deep meaning though I may bore.
You are ethereal for a corporeal being like me,
No body told me, 'She is an Angel! See.'

Feelings can never be taught, they are instantaneously felt.
Story of Romeo and Juliet made my heart melt,
But Romeo never told me how the word Angel is spelt,
It was love inside me which made those letters spelt.

I hope you won't misunderstand my feelings to be bought,
It was long ago I heard Romeo's story and then I sought
For a girl who was just a girl for remaining lot.
For me she is an Angel, my life, I love her a lot.




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She Is An Angel, My Life

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gud work
by: Vikas

the rhymes are very well used...

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Not Bad
by: Ethan

Must be the language difference that makes parts of your poem sound a little off but good poem ... just .02

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Nice
by: Josh

Nice job on this one.

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Very Nice
by: Katie

Another nice poem. These must be truly coming from your heart. When that happens the words just flow.

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AWESOME!
by: Arpit

Loved the last para!

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Good one
by: Davo

I like it. Lots of heartfelt emotion.

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Better
by: Allie

This poem was better than your other one, but still a little "too much rhyme" for me. I really like the pix though!

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Beautiful Poem
by: Paige

I like the hell out of this one, please keep writing them.

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very good
by: Prashant Agarwal

excellent!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Ultimate
by: Prakhar

u rocking bro....u have done quite a work...just tell me one...have u asked "her" to read it...she will love you twice after this...:P

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Excellent
by: Nitish

Nice to see such expressions in your words...Brilliant..:)

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Beautiful poem...
by: Anonymous

very nice and meaningful poem..n it didn't bore me a bit..:)
Hey it's easy for u to get some space in ur ANGEL's heart, you may simply ask her to read this poem..

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