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My Angel

by Nitish
(Kanpur, Uttar Pradesh, INDIA)


My angel
Do you know
They praised me all
for the things
that you made me learn.
Oh, they don't know
they are so naive
for you are the source
of every reason.
My zeal, My dream
My God , My life
and yes my smile too.
But I know
and I know it deep
if it weren't you
in two eyes of mine
What would have
more worth of my breath
than that worthless
log of wood.



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My Angel

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Nice Poem
by: Lila

I recognize a cultural difference, but I still liked your poem. Good job!

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Deep Poem
by: Katie

I understand at least parts of this one. Very deep poem.

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Thank You
by: Anonymous

Thank you for your Honest comments..:)

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So So
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Not bad, I guess.

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Insipid
by: Allie

Didn't much care for this one. BTW, who's naive?? :(

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