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In Which Your Last Few Breath Shined

by Nitish
(Kanpur, Uttar Pradesh, INDIA)


Let me confess
one thing
just something.
Oh, let me bleed
just bleed to the core
if you say
I will lay here and
bleed one night more.
Just something to say
my angel
and then
you won't see me more.

But promise me
you won't cry.
For these words
are my heart itself.
And I don't want to get it wet
when I get it Back.

Now let me try
If I can push
my lips
and spit some blood out.
Catch them and paint with them
the very heart of yours.

Oh, I am sure
You will hear
these beats
as they are mine.

If I loved you true
I shall get old
with all my hairs white.
And may lose my teeth
Oh, yes full with wrinkles too
on my still face.
With all your memories
all of it I shall keep
in my heart till I die.
No, I won't bleed it
Never! I say.
Whatever you say.
No! No! No!
No matter,
how much brave smile
you put on your face
and make me realize
that you are well.
I won't let it slip
slip out of my minds.

It's true that I may not
have touched you in real.
And my hands
may have shivered
even in dreams
on those
two eyes of yours.
But I sleep
I sleep with your memories,
and that too
holding them
wide and tight,
isn't that fair?
You say, Oh I am crazy
but I know
I know, I am Sane
but my feelings Insane.

Will crave for you
till my dim breath shines
and if it's possible
will lie with you
in the same coffin
in which
many many years ago
your last few breath shined....:)



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In Which Your Last Few Breath Shined

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starstarstar 		Deep Shit
by: Paige

That one was took to the grave!!
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starstarstarstar 		Another Good One
by: Davo

Comment title says it all.
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starstarstarstarstar 		Why I rate it 5?
by: Anonymous

This poem proves that u r an IITian! Somewhat obscure but when the true meaning of the poem is unveiled, it is pure gold!
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starstarstarstarstar 		gr8
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mast h
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starstarstar 		Thank you All..:)
by: Nitish

I love your generous comments....:) please keep reviewing..:)
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by: Josh

Pretty good stuff.
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by: Katie

This one was just a little harder to follow, but still a very good poem. I am trying to understand exactly what happened. It is a truly touching story that you are telling in your poems. There is a page in this site 'Share a Story'. Perhaps you could explain the root of your poems there. Some of the readers would like to better understand.

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