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I Don't Want to Live My Dream Again

by Nitish
(Kanpur, Uttar Pradesh, INDIA)


I don't want to live my dream again.

Dreams they say I just fantasized.
A bunch of ripples that must die.
O God, wash them out.
I don't want to create fairy tale again.

Surge of thoughts,
baseless and corrupted
Sprouted from unworthy mind,
yeah, you are right.
O God, KILL them all
I don't want to think again.

But still I feel privileged,
O God, why haven't you taken my eyes,
root of all evils.
Dig them deep
I don't want to see again.

But there is still more to take,
Don't be pity on me, take them all
whatever you want snatch them all.

Take my heart and my senses too
for nothing I should feel again.

Take my breath and my life too
for no reason I should live again.

Take my body and pound them well
for no reason I should carry again.

Breaths are burden and so are my hopes
just let me free and pass again......





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I Don't Want to Live My Dream Again

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Good Poem
by: Anonymous

Good poem. I really enjoyed it.

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Well done
by: Kshitij

Finally no mistakes in this one! Good going! This is the best of all!

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soul touching
by: Anonymous

its very pessimistic kind of poem ......dangerous for society .....more lethal than bomb .....actually its so emotional that i wont recommend anyone to read it especially broken heart people

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Thank You Katie
by: Anonymous

thank You for such huge appreciation.........But I just wanted to say one thing ..if anyone deserve praise of all this..then I think its 'her' not me.......she is my source of creativity..has not been she there in my life..I would have been worthless log of wood........so all praises to her...:)

and yes thank you once again for constantly reviewing my poems..it gives a lot of encouragement to me..:)


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Such Emotion
by: Katie

Your poems express eloquently such deep emotion. You have a true talent. I still think some words or phrases are altered due to translation, but truly excellent poems.

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