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Given Love

by Ranzes
(Philippines)


I gave you my coat,
For you to not get cold
I open you my door within,
For you to come in
I offered you my help,
For you to know the second step
I created a song for you,
For you to hear the truth
I clean your mess,
For you to know I'm the best
I used to follow your rules,
For you to know I am willing to make myself a fool
I offered you a good self-condition,
For you to ask me a relation
And I know I gave and offered you my heart,
But not to tear it apart?



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Given Love

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by: barbara

itz kk but keep tryin :)

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Good Poem
by: Josie

Really enjoyed you poem! Shows the true depth of your emotions. Your write really well.

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Not Bad
by: Anonymous

Kind of hard to follow

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Pretty Good
by: Susan

Might be a language barrier, but your poem is a little hard to follow. Still, I thought it was pretty good.

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by: Stephanie

I enjoyed this poem cuz there are alot of people out there (if you give them and inch, they will take a mile)& will take your kindness for weakness & will rip your heart out (IF YOU LET THEM)

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