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Black Bird

by BBY Gurl
(Dos Palos, California USA)

Black Bird is My Ex's Nickname

Black Bird is My Ex's Nickname


Did you care?
Did you care for me?
Why did you stare
When I cried sadly?
****
I miss you so much
I'll reach out for you,
I just want one more touch
But our time is over due.
****
Do opposites attract?
Was that word true
Or was it an act?
Why did you say "I LOVE YOU?"
****
That word felt like a hit
I fell on the floor,
And I feel like shit...
Now I have to even the score.
****
LOVE is very powerful
It's a very strange word,
It is very meaningful
Now I say ... bye bye BLACK BIRD.



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Black Bird

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Mediocre
by: Leigh

Let sleeping dogs lie, and work a little harder on your poems.

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I agree
by: Davo

I agree with Josh.

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Sad
by: Katie

This one is sad, but also vengeful. Kinda like that. Not a bad poem, but not your best work.

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Not Bad
by: Josh

Not a bad poem. Maybe you could try focusing on quality and not quantity. They are getting a little repetitive. Who knows, maybe you are just letting feelings out and not really concentrating on the quality of the poems.

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