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A True Battle

by Ranzes
(Philippines)


I dropped my sword
With less hope and less faith
Looking at the tree which slowly lost its leaves
A tree that reminds me of losing someone
A tree that reminds me that I surrendered
I surrendered cause I've been to a battle
A battle of a truly in-love woman
A woman who tried to fight
Even though she's fighting for nothing
A woman who tried to prove something
Something that will help her to lessen the pain she had
Lessen the tears she cried
But not to let go the one she loved
She dropped her sword because she has no strength to fight
Fight for the leaves that are falling, losing??
No, it can't be!
It's her special someone she loses!



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Hard to follow
by: Leroy

Hard to understand.

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Good Effort
by: Anonymous

Very symbolic and interesting mindset

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Good Job
by: Davo

Excellent poem!

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sad
by: Josh

Way too sad for me. Being a guy, it was a little too hard for me to understand.

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Touching
by: Stephanie

I really like this poem.

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