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5 Star Poems

Here they are so they may shine
The 5 star poems, the cream of the crop,
Pretty much unrivaled since 2009
They are the champions and hard to top.

A 5 star rating, as good as it gets
These wonderful poems written by our visitors,
Listed in the order each was submitted
Our sincere thanks to each talented contributor.

OUR VERY FIRST 5 STAR POEM

TIME FOR CHANGE

Davo
Somewhere, USA

You live your life full of strife
No one trusts you, not even your wife

You feel like a joke cause you're always broke
from blowing your money on booze and coke

Not a friend can be found that wants you around
because all you do is let them down

They try to get you to stop and think
but all you want is another drink
or another joint, or another line
and before you know it you're doing time

You feel like hell in your cell
with nothing to look forward to but chow and mail

You miss your family and all day long
you sit and you wonder about what went wrong

For those like me, that fall in this range
it's plain to see that it's time for change

MY CHRISTMAS LIST

Michael
Georgia, USA

I don't know how to tell you this
But you didn't make my Christmas list.

You've been mean to me the whole year through
And that's one of the reasons I'm dumping you.

I'm tired of the nagging and your other crap
Every word you speak feels like a slap,
In my face or against my head
You make me wish that I were dead.

So pack your things and be on your way
Cause that's all I want on Christmas Day.

MISTRESS ALCOHOL

Davo
Somewhere, USA

I can't believe I've allowed this to be
That bitch alcohol has taken something else from me,
The woman I love and thought would always be there
It seems for me no longer cares.

She says she's tired and will share me no more
With my Mistress Alcohol, the worthless whore,
I'm so very sad and she I will truly miss,
But I guess I always knew it would come to this.

Even though without a doubt,
My mistress will rot your soul from the inside out.
My crazy mind is damaged and weak
For my mistress' company it shall always seek.

I wish I could stop the madness and turn back time
Back to the day she first became mine,
Back when there were still feelings of passion and lust
Back before this relationship started to rust.

I can't believe that the ax has fell,
She's taken my soul and left me an empty shell.

SHATTERED LIVES

Stephanie
Columbus, GA USA

I can't believe
I've allowed this for so long,
But I hoped you'd stop drinking
Now I know I was wrong.

Sexually & financially you abandoned me
For weeks at a time,
But when it came to loving her
She could always get your last dime.

I hate it had to come to this,
But I'm showing you the door,
Always remember just one thing
You chose that worthless whore.

The love of a good women
Is what you now shall seek,
Cause I'm letting your Mistress have you
Seven days a week.

With not enough gas for you to go to work
I had to catch your slack,
But every Sunday you drove out of state
Just to get a damn six-pack.

She goes with you everywhere you go
She's made you such a slob,
You can't stay away from her 8 hours a day
You even take her to your job.

You lie & you sneak just to be with her
You even take her to your Mother's,
Just to be with that same old bitch
That took the life of one of my brothers.

I'm sick & tired of being sick & tired
So I gave you a simple choice,
But the only words that came through to you
Were the ones of your Mistress' voice.

She'll make you think you're happy
And become your way of life,
Refusing to be your Mistress anymore
She then becomes your wife.

In the end, she'll come before food
And it makes me very sad,
How could you ever love the bitch
That killed your poor old Dad?

You better believe
That the ax has finally fell,
And you and your Mistress Alcohol
Can both go straight to hell.

THE REALIZATION HITS

Angela Arnold
Saint Joseph, MO USA

All the lies revealed,
Your trust is taken away.
No more future plans to hold,
No more words to say.

The dreams you had now ending,
Watching your hope now disappear.
Everything now means nothing,
A pain no one should bear.

Feeling horribly dead inside,
Your heart turning to stone.
Can’t bear to think of the future,
Now that you’ll be facing it alone.

Your faith shifts into blame,
What was love dissolves to hate.
Feeling completely lost in this world,
Now seeing this is your fate.

Any hope of happiness fading,
Reality begins to set in.
Despair is all you have now,
You’ll never love again.

MY VALENTINE

Davo
Georgia, USA

This is the day
The one day a year,
For me to tell you
How much I love you, My Dear.

A day for all sweethearts
To show that they care,
With candy and flowers
Or big fuzzy bears.

A day such as this
Should be treated like gold,
It's the day for all lovers
The young and the old
To let each other know
They have something to say
That is ...

I LOVE YOU, SWEETHEART!!
AND
HAPPY VALENTINE'S DAY!!

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